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Update 6 - new chapter up

Tue Jul 14, 2009, 7:32 AM

Mood: Irritated
Listening to: Comatose by Skillet
Reading: Spriggan Mirror
Watching: Iron Man
Playing: undecided, jumping around...
Drinking: water

Hey peoples, I have my next chapter up on wolfheart, number three, and it'll have brought you up to date on what i've got, more or less.

I really need some feedback here on it, what you like and dislike, what you look forward to, so please please please.... (lets add one more please for redundancy) please review either there or here and let me know.

here's what i'd like to see your comments look like (note i leave nothing after each category thing so you can do a straight copy paste...)

For those of you who don't know where to find it, go to [link] and substitute the 1 in front of wolfheart for whatever chapter you want... tho you'll still need the / around it.

I like:

I don't like:

This looks interesting:

This i didn't wanna see:

I would change:

I wouldn't change:

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~Suu999 Jul 14, 2009, 7:53:14 AM

Why is Chapter 3 in all caps? I think you'd better correct that and re-upload it, it's very difficult to read.

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"Alien life form. Looks like it's been dead a long time. Fossilized. Looks like it's growing out of the chair."

~admael7014 Jul 14, 2009, 8:11:15 AM

girl.... read the disclaimer and then you'll actually understand -_- i said that there was an odd goofup and no matter what i tried it stayed in all caps.

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Why do we worry so much, despite all the time we spend planning and preventing and it amounts to nothing when nature itself comes to play.
Life may throw lemons, but what will you do when you don't have anything to go with the lemons? Its a bitter drink.

~Suu999 Jul 14, 2009, 8:46:39 AM

Ah, now I see. That sucks the comp wouldn't accept anything besides caps >_>

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"Alien life form. Looks like it's been dead a long time. Fossilized. Looks like it's growing out of the chair."

~NadiaSs91 Jul 15, 2009, 8:29:47 AM

I'm sorry I couldn't read it yet... I don't have much time and I take too long translating the texts so I could read it...

But I'll read it when I have the time, sorry!

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~admael7014 Jul 15, 2009, 9:55:46 AM

hey thats fine, just get to it when you do have time or when you do want to. no one is forcing you. ^^

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Why do we worry so much, despite all the time we spend planning and preventing and it amounts to nothing when nature itself comes to play.
Life may throw lemons, but what will you do when you don't have anything to go with the lemons? Its a bitter drink.